I read Faulty First Impressions (4), Precise Introductions for Intdividual Interpretations (5), and First Impression (19). The introduction to the first essay was pretty good, but too many quotes were used in the body paragraphs and the author absolutely should not have quoted dialogue between multiple people. The introduction to the second essay used an example in the introduction paragraph, which is a major errror. Also, some of the quotes, the first one for example, didn't seem to have anything to do with the analysis that follows them. The third essay is written the best, although there are no ground-breaking points.
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